AMERICA’S INDEPENDENCE DAY
On July 1st 1776, Congressman Richard Henry Lee of Virginia presented a Resolution, later adopted in the late afternoon of July 4, 1776, as follows:
“RESOLVED: That these United colonies are, and of right ought to be Free and independent States, that they are absolved from all allegiance to the British Crown, and all political connection between them and the State of Great Britain is, and ought to be totally dissolved.”
This important Resolution was made a designated National holiday for all Americans to remember a significant moment in time, when the United States declared itself a FREE Nation.
We, as Americans enjoy the freedom and independence fought for by our ancestors, and should take this opportunity to be thankful for the men and women who built this country, fought for the freedom of this country, and still serve to keep us a free and independent Nation.
Happy July 4th, Paula
I was also, until I found a Booklet with the best advice, and easy to understand information on the subject of keywords.
What are Keywords?
They are the words and phrases that searchers enter when looking for something on the web. The search engines like Google, Bing and Yahoo scan websites, for these words
Example: You have a website catering to baking and selling pies—a customer types in pies, and receive a list of websites selling pies. However, you specialize in Apple Pies. You need a more specific phrase other than “pies” such as “Best Apple Pies”, which may offer a list of potential customers interested only in apple pies. Choosing the right keywords can bring you success by bringing the search engines to all websites specializing in best apple pies, rather than pies.
Before you make this important decision, think like a customer and type in all keywords relevant to apple pies. Google suggests about 15-20 keywords. If you are a prime member of Amazon, you can download, FREE, books on Keyword planning. For Google click below:
Did you know that statistics show that when people search on line, the landing page gets clicked on 70% of the time. So, the landing page needs Keywords. However, search engines crawl over each page of your website. Hence—all pages should contain the keywords your audience is searching for, thereby improving maximum visibility of the website.
Do you write Articles or a Blog? Use a keyword relevant to what the article is about, or the topic of your Blog. They should be placed in two places, as suggested by the Reference Guide. First, place your keyword in the title—next, once in the article body, especially in either the first or last paragraph.
Well, we are not baking apple pies—we are Writers, and authors, who need to find the best Keywords for our latest story. Test it now by typing in keywords relevant to your genre, be it History, Thriller, Romance, Young Adult, or Horror, and see what keywords fit. You should come up with lots of good choices, which you can use over and over.
For more information, including :Common Keyword Mistakes”, How to Know if you have the Right Keywords, Search Volumes, and more, pick up the book below:
‘THE UNTIMATE SEO KEYWORD REFERENCE GUIDE”
by Gary Bernier and Stephen Semple.
HONORING ALL MOTHERS
It was not that long ago that the first celebration of Mother’s Day occurred, when Anna Jarvis, in 1908, held a memorial for her mother at St. Andrew’s Methodist Church in West Virginia.
It became an official U.S. holiday in 1914, and is celebrated yearly on the second Sunday in May. Soon after, Hallmark Cards and other companies started selling Mother’s Day cards. The Holiday grew, and grew until now, weeks before, all stores are filled with flowers, candies, perfumes and jewelry to give mother..
However, there is more to Mother’s Day than Gifts. It is a time to show your thanks for all the times she was there for you, and still is— with deeds done without asking —with kindness, compassion, and strength given you to cope with life’s ups and downs, and for guiding you through tears and smiles, all with an unconditional love.
Try speaking from your heart, thanking her for the all she has done in guiding you to become the person you are
Happy Mother’s Day to all Mothers… Paula
When I wrote my blog in May, 2017, “HOW TO BUILD A FICTIONAL CHARACTER,” I promised more on the subject of bringing characters to life. Today, we will cover the character driven story.`
First: Decide whether to create your character from inside out (first person) or outside in (third person). If writing in the first person, you have access to your character’s appearance, thoughts and events. If writing in the third person, the reader is detached from the character and relies on others for information.
When introducing all characters, especially your main character, your Second action is to apply the five W’s: WHO, WHAT, WHEN, WHY and WHERE. Remember, every character has a purpose; is driven by circumstances, and wants something. If the five W’s do not apply to all characters, consider not naming or omitting them entirely. (Characters do think, feel and act, like real people.)
WHO is your character—male or female, age, occupation?
WHAT is the purpose, need, or circumstance?
WHEN does your story begin—year, period of time?
WHY is character taking the course of action?
WHERE does your story take place?
Other traits to consider when introducing characters: Is your character capable of surprise, or disappointment? Are your main characters convincing or always not clear about what he or she wants?
When working I n the first person, because you have access to a character’s thoughts and actions, you can create a rich, imaginative, person—observing their every move and reaction. Hint: In describing appearance, why not give your character one distinguishing feature—one your reader can relate to.
EXAMPLE: “When first we meet, I tend to give the impression of weakness and vulnerability, but once you know me, you will find I am a strong- and resilient individual, determined to have my own way.”
When writing in the third person, you introduce your character by reporting a first impression given by another. However, you can use the same dramatic descriptions of appearance and actions.
EXAMPLE: “When first meeting Alison, one would consider her weak and vulnerable, but later find she is of strong character, resilient, and determined to have her own way.”
I have used both first person and third person, and while I find third person easier, I love having control of the inner thoughts of my protagonist, something a person on the outside cannot see or feel.
Like this post, or have suggestions?—Send me your thoughts, and what you want to read next.
Blog –May, 2017: HOW TO BUILD A FICTIONAL CHARACTER
Happy writing, Paula
No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. No surprise in the writer, no surprise in the reader― Robert Frost
DOES THE FIRST LINE OF YOUR STORY POP?
Do you want the opening line of your novel to stimulate the reader to continue? If the first sentence of your novel is boring, then the reader will put the book down, never to return.
So, put away the proverb. Erase it from your mind, because First Impressions do count, when writing.
There are many great works of literature that offer a peek into the story with their opening sentence. One you will surely know is a classic novel, written in 1859, that is still being read and discussed by university lecturers: A TALE OF TWO CITIES by Charles Dickens.
“It was the best of times, it was the worst of times.”
To this day, it is quoted over and over; remembered by all because it told you just enough to peak your curiosity. Your first sentence should suggest something about your story, be it character driven or driven by the plot?
If it is character driven, a wonderful example is LORD JIM, By Joseph Conrad, which was published as a serial between 1899 and 1900.
“He was an inch, perhaps two, under six feet, powerfully built, and he advanced straight at you with a slight stoop of the shoulders, head forward, and a fixed from-under stare which made you think of a charging bull.”
The first sentence could be an introduction to the plot of the book like 1984, written by George Orwell, and published in 1949:
“It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen.”
Many novelists begin their story without putting down the first sentence. Knowing how important that first sentence is causes many to think and re-think before taking action. Sometimes, getting into the story, leaning more about your characters or where the plot is taking you, may alleviate any discomfort and allow you to return to the beginning, to put that first sentence down.
Happy Writing, Paula
DEFINITION OF ALGORITHM: A logical step-by-step computer program —a flow chart— a system—a set of rules…
What if, in the near future, a computer program can predict your book’s success or failure?
An article written by Joel Shurkin awakened me to such a possibility. Scientists at Stony Brook University, in New York, think a computer program might predict successful books and recently, using the computer Algorithm, found that the program had about 84 per cent accuracy when applied to published books.
In a paper published by the Association of Computational Linguistics, “the writing style of books was correlated with the success of the book”. They used a process called statistical stylometry, a statistical analysis of the literary styles of several genres of books and identified characteristic stylistic elements common in successful books.
Some of the early finds by the scientists amaze me because they found journalists tend to use more nouns, pronouns and prepositions than other writers and in doing so, are more successful. ——– Both Hemingway and Charles Dickens began their careers as Journalists. To further excite me, a computer scientist at Israel’s University developed a program that tells whether the author is male or female 80 percent of the time.
Is it possible, Editors will now use an algorithm program to determine a books success or failure before they print? Wow!
There are more findings and observations in Mr. Shurkin’s article—too much to elaborate here, so give it a read. I think you will find it as interesting as I did.
For reading, go to “American Institute of Physics”